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Schulte Kitchen Wrap Organizer, White
Price : $9.77
Features
: - Made from heavy gauge steel
- Durable epoxy coating
- Easy to clean
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The perfect solution for storing plastic wrap, aluminum foil, and food storage bags. Use it in your pantry or under your sink. The wrap organizer makes it easy to access what you need when you are covering left overs or packing your kids lunch for school.
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Schulte Large Double Shelf, White
Price : $17.97
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: - Made from heavy gauge steel
- Durable epoxy coating
- Easy to clean
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Create more vertical space in your cabinets or pantry with wire shelving. By using wire shelves, you can organize your items so that they are easier to see and access. These shelves are epoxy coated making them more durable for all your storage needs.
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5 Tier Pan Organizer
Price : $7.95
Features
: - This Cabinet Pan Holder conserves space, while keeping pans separated and at hand.
- Holds up to 5 pans.
- Durable steel wire.
- 11.75" x 10" x 9.25"
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No more messy cabinets! Store your pans of various sizes in a neat and organized way, without scratching them. This Cabinet Pan Holder conserves space, while keeping pans separated and at hand. Holds up to 5 pans. Durable steel wire. 11.75" x 10" x 9.25". Pans not included.
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Organizer Rack for Bakeware, Cookware and Lids (White) (12"L x 7-1/4"W x 7-1/8"H)
Price : $6.79
Features
: - Color: White
- Size: 12"L x 7-1/4"W x 7-1/8"H
- This Cookware Rack is designed for today's bakeware.
- Holds muffin tins, cookie sheets, pot lids and more.
- Constructed of metal with a vinyl coating for easy cleaning.
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Muffin tins, cookie sheets, pans and pot lids stay upright and easy to reach in this sturdy cook-ware organizer. Six sections give you ample room for keeping your cooking necessities in order. Durable metal frame has a nonstick white vinyl coating to protect against scratches. Bake-ware racks are a simple and effective way to keep your kitchen cupboards and cabinets organized. Measures 12"L x 7-1/4"W x 7-1/8"H. .
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Schulte Double Cabinet Shelf, White
Price : $15.81
Features
: - Made from heavy gauge steel
- Durable epoxy coating
- Easy to clean
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Create more vertical space in your cabinets or pantry with wire shelving. By using wire shelves, you can organize your items so that they are easier to see and access. These shelves are epoxy coated making them more durable for all your storage needs.
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Question : items to put into my tent trailer...more answers please?
Items to put into my tent trailer?i have a list of things already but i want to know what you have in your trailer?anything that i will need or should just have on handMY LIST:pots/panscookwaresilverwareutensilscleaning suppliestowelstoilet paperbaby wipesmicrowave?paper towelspaper plates/bowls/cups(until i can afford to get real plates etc.)clorox wipeswash clothesshampoo/conditionerextra tooth brushes/ tooth pastepillows/blankets/sheetstrash can/trash bagsfirst aid kitflash lights/batterieslanternmatches/lighterear plugsmosquito repellentcandles/holders(citronella candles)fold able chairs/tablegames(dice,cards etc.)skewers for marshmallow roastingfishing stuff(if available to fish)washing tubsanything that i have missed please let me know...thanks and happy trails :)
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You only need to ask once, Congrats to your new toy, lists are long so I will recommend to you the yahoo groups "Camping adventures" they have several lists and advice to give you as a new tent trailer camper. here is the linkhttp://groups.yahoo.com/group/CampingAdv…One word of advice is to watch the weight of the stuff you do bring as everything adds up so bring plastic/paper or just the minimum you need of each item. Look for ultralight items for each that you need.Have fun!
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Question : wedding registry question?
i’m getting started on my registries for my upcoming wedding, and so far i think i’ve done pretty well. thing is, i’ve never done this before (haha), so i don’t know if i’m including too much, or too little. i’ve decided as my rule of thumb, i’ll have a few more gifts on the registry than i have guests, so that there’s enough to pick from. and of course, i’m trying to add in some cheap stuff (along with expensive kitchen stuff that i really want!!), just so there’s something for every price range. i’m pretty sure i’m not done yet, but i just wanted to ask a general opinion of people who may have done this before. (:so far i havekitchendining set (includes dinner plate, salad plate, bowl, mug) (for 8)drinkware set (includes 14 oz glasses and 17 oz glasses) (8 ea.)2-quart tea kettle (kitchen aid)single serve beverage maker (for coffee) (tassimo)**carousel to hold the cartridges for the tassimo7 cup food processor (kitchen aid)56 oz blender (kitchen aid)5 quart mixer (kitchen aid)5 speed hand mixer (kitchen aid)zerowater pitchermixing bowl setflatware setgeorge foreman grillserving utensils (large serving spoon, slotted spoon, spatula, slotted turner, basting brush, whiskbathroomaccessory set (wastebasket, soap pump, soap dish, tissue box, toothbrush holder)hand towelswashclothsbath towelsfabric shower curtainvinyl linerbath rughamperbedroomcloset doubleri was thinking about adding a down comforter and sheets for the bedroom, and maybe a cookware set for the kitchen, but i can’t think of anything else to add. anybody have any suggestions? or anything i should exclude from the list?thanks (:
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i’m getting started on my registries for my upcoming wedding, and so far i think i’ve done pretty well. thing is, i’ve never done this before (haha), so i don’t know if i’m including too much, or too little. i’ve decided as my rule of thumb, i’ll have a few more gifts on the registry than i have guests, so that there’s enough to pick from. and of course, i’m trying to add in some cheap stuff (along with expensive kitchen stuff that i really want!!), just so there’s something for every price range. i’m pretty sure i’m not done yet, but i just wanted to ask a general opinion of people who may have done this before. (:so far i havekitchendining set (includes dinner plate, salad plate, bowl, mug) (for 8)drinkware set (includes 14 oz glasses and 17 oz glasses) (8 ea.)2-quart tea kettle (kitchen aid)single serve beverage maker (for coffee) (tassimo)**carousel to hold the cartridges for the tassimo7 cup food processor (kitchen aid)56 oz blender (kitchen aid)5 quart mixer (kitchen aid)5 speed hand mixer (kitchen aid)zerowater pitchermixing bowl setflatware setgeorge foreman grillserving utensils (large serving spoon, slotted spoon, spatula, slotted turner, basting brush, whiskbathroomaccessory set (wastebasket, soap pump, soap dish, tissue box, toothbrush holder)hand towelswashclothsbath towelsfabric shower curtainvinyl linerbath rughamperbedroomcloset doubleri was thinking about adding a down comforter and sheets for the bedroom, and maybe a cookware set for the kitchen, but i can’t think of anything else to add. anybody have any suggestions? or anything i should exclude from the list?thanks (:
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Question : Proof-read it plz...it is due tomorrow afternoon..100 points for anyone?
The most momentous and meaningful ritual in my life is Thanksgiving with my family. The whole day is considered an enjoyment time with my families and there is no arguing that in my eyes. Nothing is more perfect than my whole family joining together for thanksgiving. As you know that it is eventful day celebration, show gratitude to God and mostly just each other’s company.show gratitude to God and mostly just each other’s company.. My mouth waters as the scent of melting dried turkey and apple pie across the room. The heat in the kitchen is ferocious, my mother is curved over the sink, scouring and scraping large stainless steel cookware which is only used for company. The delectable aroma of my Mom's famous mussels rises from the pot, which can only mean dinner is right around the corner. Subsequently, I place a yellow tablecloth on the table; the napkins on the napkin holder. The table is set for 10, we've having 4 guests. As I started set up the family table in the living room, the smell of Turkey fills the air as it cooks in the oven were wonderful. when put it in the middle of the table, next I got out the plates they too had fall colors, the napkins also had tiny fall leaves on them so they went along with the centerpiece, I got out my candles, the forks and the glasses and put them on the table, after I lit the candles I took a step back and the table looked as if it belonged in a magazine, I was so exhilarating.I started to smell the aroma of the turkey and I started feeling kind of panic because I knew that it wouldn't be too much longer and my family would be here soon. Afterward, I could feel the excitement and the anxiousness starting to swell up inside and since everything was going as planned I relaxed. Since the turkey and all sides were on it was now time to address the table, earlier that week, mother had purchased a beautiful centerpiece that the most vibrant fall colors with twigs, berries and all different colored leaves. After the turkey was done it was time to get the rest of the meal ready, cut up onions and celery, my eyes began to water because the onions were strong, the giblets were boiling on a pot that I started and the dressing was ready to be mixed together and put in the oven. When everyone arrived we all stood around the table with the turkey and sides spread out before us in a magnificent feast, and we each began to say something we grateful for when it was my turn I looked around at my family, and the meal and just simply stated that I was grateful for the opportunity to fix this meal for them and I was thankful for the food that the good Lord and given us and I was thankful that my first Thanksgiving dinner was success.My grandmother comes over to help my mother in the kitchen preparing turkey . When the turkey was ready, my mother takes it out and place it right there in the center of the table. Including green beans, mashed potatoes, a great gravy recipe, cranberries, your favorite stuffing recipe, sweet potato recipes, corn bread and, of course, pumpkin pie. We all gather around and we recite a prayer to give thanks to all we have. Turkey tastes more like chicken compared to other meats. It has a blander flavor. A turkey leg tastes similar to a chickens’. The celebration itself is something to look forward to every year and it is something I hope to carry on with my own family one day.
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The most momentous and meaningful ritual in my life is Thanksgiving with my family. The whole day is considered an enjoyment time with my families and there is no arguing that in my eyes. Nothing is more perfect than my whole family joining together for thanksgiving. As you know that it is eventful day celebration, show gratitude to God and mostly just each other’s company.show gratitude to God and mostly just each other’s company.. My mouth waters as the scent of melting dried turkey and apple pie across the room. The heat in the kitchen is ferocious, my mother is curved over the sink, scouring and scraping large stainless steel cookware which is only used for company. The delectable aroma of my Mom's famous mussels rises from the pot, which can only mean dinner is right around the corner. Subsequently, I place a yellow tablecloth on the table; the napkins on the napkin holder. The table is set for 10, we've having 4 guests. As I started set up the family table in the living room, the smell of Turkey fills the air as it cooks in the oven were wonderful. when put it in the middle of the table, next I got out the plates they too had fall colors, the napkins also had tiny fall leaves on them so they went along with the centerpiece, I got out my candles, the forks and the glasses and put them on the table, after I lit the candles I took a step back and the table looked as if it belonged in a magazine, I was so exhilarating.I started to smell the aroma of the turkey and I started feeling kind of panic because I knew that it wouldn't be too much longer and my family would be here soon. Afterward, I could feel the excitement and the anxiousness starting to swell up inside and since everything was going as planned I relaxed. Since the turkey and all sides were on it was now time to address the table, earlier that week, mother had purchased a beautiful centerpiece that the most vibrant fall colors with twigs, berries and all different colored leaves. After the turkey was done it was time to get the rest of the meal ready, cut up onions and celery, my eyes began to water because the onions were strong, the giblets were boiling on a pot that I started and the dressing was ready to be mixed together and put in the oven. When everyone arrived we all stood around the table with the turkey and sides spread out before us in a magnificent feast, and we each began to say something we grateful for when it was my turn I looked around at my family, and the meal and just simply stated that I was grateful for the opportunity to fix this meal for them and I was thankful for the food that the good Lord and given us and I was thankful that my first Thanksgiving dinner was success.My grandmother comes over to help my mother in the kitchen preparing turkey . When the turkey was ready, my mother takes it out and place it right there in the center of the table. Including green beans, mashed potatoes, a great gravy recipe, cranberries, your favorite stuffing recipe, sweet potato recipes, corn bread and, of course, pumpkin pie. We all gather around and we recite a prayer to give thanks to all we have. Turkey tastes more like chicken compared to other meats. It has a blander flavor. A turkey leg tastes similar to a chickens’. The celebration itself is something to look forward to every year and it is something I hope to carry on with my own family one day.
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Question : items to put into my tent trailer..more answers please?
i have a list of things already but i want to know what you have in your trailer?anything that i will need or should just have on handMY LIST:pots/panscookwaresilverwareutensilscleaning suppliestowelstoilet paperbaby wipesmicrowave?paper towelspaper plates/bowls/cups(until i can afford to get real plates etc.)clorox wipeswash clothesshampoo/conditionerextra tooth brushes/ tooth pastepillows/blankets/sheetstrash can/trash bagsfirst aid kitflash lights/batterieslanternmatches/lighterear plugsmosquito repellentcandles/holders(citronella candles)fold able chairs/tablegames(dice,cards etc.)skewers for marshmallow roastingfishing stuff(if available to fish)washing tubsanything that i have missed please let me know...thanks and happy trails :)
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You only need to ask once, Congrats to your new toy, lists are long so I will recommend to you the yahoo groups "Camping adventures" they have several lists and advice to give you as a new tent trailer camper. here is the linkhttp://groups.yahoo.com/group/CampingAdv…One word of advice is to watch the weight of the stuff you do bring as everything adds up so bring plastic/paper or just the minimum you need of each item. Look for ultralight items for each that you need.Have fun!
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Question : items to put into my tent trailer..more answers please?
i have a list of things already but i want to know what you have in your trailer?anything that i will need or should just have on handMY LIST:pots/panscookwaresilverwareutensilscleaning suppliestowelstoilet paperbaby wipesmicrowave?paper towelspaper plates/bowls/cups(until i can afford to get real plates etc.)clorox wipeswash clothesshampoo/conditionerextra tooth brushes/ tooth pastepillows/blankets/sheetstrash can/trash bagsfirst aid kitflash lights/batterieslanternmatches/lighterear plugsmosquito repellentcandles/holders(citronella candles)fold able chairs/tablegames(dice,cards etc.)skewers for marshmallow roastingfishing stuff(if available to fish)washing tubsanything that i have missed please let me know...thanks and happy trails :)
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You only need to ask once, Congrats to your new toy, lists are long so I will recommend to you the yahoo groups "Camping adventures" they have several lists and advice to give you as a new tent trailer camper. here is the linkhttp://groups.yahoo.com/group/CampingAdventures/?yguid=367043354One word of advice is to watch the weight of the stuff you do bring as everything adds up so bring plastic/paper or just the minimum you need of each item. Look for ultralight items for each that you need.Have fun!
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Question : Proof-read it plz...it is due tomorrow afternoon..100 points for anyone?
The most momentous and meaningful ritual in my life is Thanksgiving with my family. The whole day is considered an enjoyment time with my families and there is no arguing that in my eyes. Nothing is more perfect than my whole family joining together for thanksgiving. As you know that it is eventful day celebration, show gratitude to God and mostly just each other’s company.show gratitude to God and mostly just each other’s company.. My mouth waters as the scent of melting dried turkey and apple pie across the room. The heat in the kitchen is ferocious, my mother is curved over the sink, scouring and scraping large stainless steel cookware which is only used for company. The delectable aroma of my Mom's famous mussels rises from the pot, which can only mean dinner is right around the corner. Subsequently, I place a yellow tablecloth on the table; the napkins on the napkin holder. The table is set for 10, we've having 4 guests. As I started set up the family table in the living room, the smell of Turkey fills the air as it cooks in the oven were wonderful. when put it in the middle of the table, next I got out the plates they too had fall colors, the napkins also had tiny fall leaves on them so they went along with the centerpiece, I got out my candles, the forks and the glasses and put them on the table, after I lit the candles I took a step back and the table looked as if it belonged in a magazine, I was so exhilarating.I started to smell the aroma of the turkey and I started feeling kind of panic because I knew that it wouldn't be too much longer and my family would be here soon. Afterward, I could feel the excitement and the anxiousness starting to swell up inside and since everything was going as planned I relaxed. Since the turkey and all sides were on it was now time to address the table, earlier that week, mother had purchased a beautiful centerpiece that the most vibrant fall colors with twigs, berries and all different colored leaves. After the turkey was done it was time to get the rest of the meal ready, cut up onions and celery, my eyes began to water because the onions were strong, the giblets were boiling on a pot that I started and the dressing was ready to be mixed together and put in the oven. When everyone arrived we all stood around the table with the turkey and sides spread out before us in a magnificent feast, and we each began to say something we grateful for when it was my turn I looked around at my family, and the meal and just simply stated that I was grateful for the opportunity to fix this meal for them and I was thankful for the food that the good Lord and given us and I was thankful that my first Thanksgiving dinner was success.My grandmother comes over to help my mother in the kitchen preparing turkey . When the turkey was ready, my mother takes it out and place it right there in the center of the table. Including green beans, mashed potatoes, a great gravy recipe, cranberries, your favorite stuffing recipe, sweet potato recipes, corn bread and, of course, pumpkin pie. We all gather around and we recite a prayer to give thanks to all we have. Turkey tastes more like chicken compared to other meats. It has a blander flavor. A turkey leg tastes similar to a chickens’. The celebration itself is something to look forward to every year and it is something I hope to carry on with my own family one day.
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Very well written with descriptive language and your personal views, your gonna get good marks with that if that is a assessment piece.
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Question : 100 point for proof- reading and fix errors?
he most momentous and meaningful celebration in my life is spending Thanksgiving with my family. The whole day is a peaceful time with my family and there is no arguing. Nothing is more perfect. We show gratitude for God's grace and each other’s company during this eventful celebration.My mouth watered as the scent of melting gravy and apple pie crossed the room. The heat in the kitchen was ferocious. My mother was hunched over the sink, scouring and scraping large stainless steel cookware which is only used for company. The delectable aroma of my Mom's famous mussels rose from the pot, which could only mean dinner was right around the corner. Subsequently, I placed a yellow tablecloth on the table and the napkins in the napkin holder. The table was set for 10 because we were having 4 guests. As I began setting the table in the living room, the smell of turkey filled the air as it cooked in the oven. It looks wonderful when put it in the middle of the table. Next I got out the fall colored plates. The napkins also had tiny fall leaves on them so they went along with the centerpiece that my mother bought. I got out the candles, the forks, and the glasses and put them on the table. After I lit the candles, I took a step back and the table looked as if it belonged in a magazine. It was exhilarating.The aroma of the turkey grew stronger and I started to panic. I knew that it wouldn't be too much longer until my family arrived. I could feel the excitement and the anxiety swell up inside of me. I began to relax because everything was going as planned. Since the turkey and all sides were on their way, it was then time to dress the table. Earlier that week, mother had purchased a beautiful centerpiece with the most vibrant fall colors: brown twigs, purple berries and all different colored leaves. After the turkey was done it was time to get the rest of the meal ready. We cut up onions and celery. My eyes began to water because the onions were so strong. The giblets were boiling on a pot that I started and the dressing was ready to be mixed together, and I put in the oven. My grandmother came over to help my mother prepare the turkey in the kitchen. When the turkey was ready, my mother took it out and placed it right in the center of the table along with the other dishes. The guest arrived. We all gathered around the table with the turkey and sides spread out before us in a magnificent feast, and we each began to say something we were grateful for. When it was my turn I looked around at my family, and the meal and just simply stated that I was grateful for the opportunity to fix this meal for them, for the food that the good Lord had given us, and I was thankful that my first Thanksgiving dinner was success.We ate green beans, mashed potatoes, a great gravy recipe, cranberries, my favorite stuffing recipe, sweet potato recipes, corn bread and, of course, pumpkin pie. I had never eaten turkey before. I was surprised that it tastes more like chicken compared to other meats, but it has a blander flavor.The celebration itself is something to look forward to every year and it is something I hope to carry on with my own family one day.
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Seems fine, aside from missing the T in The on the very first paragraph.
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Question : PLEASE! PROOF READ FOR ME,?
The most momentous and meaningful ritual in my life is Thanksgiving with my family. The whole day is considered an enjoyment time with my families and there is no arguing that in my eyes. Nothing is more perfect than my whole family joining together for thanksgiving. As you know that it is eventful day celebration, show gratitude to God and mostly just each other’s company.show gratitude to God and mostly just each other’s company.. My mouth waters as the scent of melting dried turkey and apple pie across the room. The heat in the kitchen is ferocious, my mother is curved over the sink, scouring and scraping large stainless steel cookware which is only used for company. The delectable aroma of my Mom's famous mussels rises from the pot, which can only mean dinner is right around the corner. Subsequently, I place a yellow tablecloth on the table; the napkins on the napkin holder. The table is set for 10, we've having 4 guests. As I started set up the family table in the living room, the smell of Turkey fills the air as it cooks in the oven were wonderful. when put it in the middle of the table, next I got out the plates they too had fall colors, the napkins also had tiny fall leaves on them so they went along with the centerpiece, I got out my candles, the forks and the glasses and put them on the table, after I lit the candles I took a step back and the table looked as if it belonged in a magazine, I was so exhilarating.I started to smell the aroma of the turkey and I started feeling kind of panic because I knew that it wouldn't be too much longer and my family would be here soon. Afterward, I could feel the excitement and the anxiousness starting to swell up inside and since everything was going as planned I relaxed. Since the turkey and all sides were on it was now time to address the table, earlier that week, mother had purchased a beautiful centerpiece that the most vibrant fall colors with twigs, berries and all different colored leaves. After the turkey was done it was time to get the rest of the meal ready, cut up onions and celery, my eyes began to water because the onions were strong, the giblets were boiling on a pot that I started and the dressing was ready to be mixed together and put in the oven. When everyone arrived we all stood around the table with the turkey and sides spread out before us in a magnificent feast, and we each began to say something we grateful for when it was my turn I looked around at my family, and the meal and just simply stated that I was grateful for the opportunity to fix this meal for them and I was thankful for the food that the good Lord and given us and I was thankful that my first Thanksgiving dinner was success.My grandmother comes over to help my mother in the kitchen preparing turkey . When the turkey was ready, my mother takes it out and place it right there in the center of the table. Including green beans, mashed potatoes, a great gravy recipe, cranberries, your favorite stuffing recipe, sweet potato recipes, corn bread and, of course, pumpkin pie. We all gather around and we recite a prayer to give thanks to all we have. Turkey tastes more like chicken compared to other meats. It has a blander flavor. A turkey leg tastes similar to a chickens’. The celebration itself is something to look forward to every year and it is something I hope to carry on with my own family one day.
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The first paragraph can be cut. It becomes apparent in the rest of the text that its a big occasion - no need to mention it so explicitly.The rest of the paragraphs are so mixed up I can't understand what's happening! You mention setting the table and the centre piece, then include the description in the next paragraph.You need to have clear points in every paragraph; the first would be about the expectation, the excitement. The second about laying the table, the guests that are coming and the cooking. The third would be about the guests arriving, giving out drinks, putting the food on the table ect. You seem set on describing all the recipes and preparation of the food, but it isn't really necessary. Saying something like "My mother had been up since 4 in the morning, preparing the food. And now it was all nearly ready; the turkey in the oven smelled...."I'm not trying to be harsh; it's my honest opinion and this needs a lot of work, but it could be a very good piece of descriptive writing!
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Question : please proofread it 4 me?
The most momentous and meaningful ritual in my life is Thanksgiving with my family. The whole day is considered an enjoyment time with my families and there is no arguing that in my eyes. Nothing is more perfect than my whole family joining together for thanksgiving. As you know that it is eventful day celebration, show gratitude to God and mostly just each other’s company. When I walk into the house I'm immediately assaulted by the earthy smells of garlic and oregano. My mouth waters as the scent of melting dried turkey and apple pie across the room. The heat in the kitchen is ferocious, my mother is curved over the sink, scouring and scraping large stainless steel cookware which is only used for company. I know before opening the frig door that there will be at least four long loaves of freshly baked full-size turkey resting there, awaiting their turn in the over. As I started set up the family table in the living room, the smell of Turkey fills the air as it cooks in the oven were wonderful. I love to sneak in to grab a taste of the gravy simmering on the stove. The delectable aroma of my Mom's famous mussels rises from the pot, which can only mean dinner is right around the corner. Subsequently, I place a yellow tablecloth on the table; the napkins on the napkin holder. The table is set for 10, we've having 4 guests. If she made both the pans , I can have at least 1 piece turkey legs for dinner, 2 piece apple pies tomorrow for lunch, and if I hide a piece in the closet, another piece for lunch on Friday. Yes! Life is good.My grandmother comes over to help my mother in the kitchen preparing turkey. When the turkey was ready, my mother takes it out and place it right there in the center of the table. Including green beans, mashed potatoes, a great gravy recipe, cranberries, your favorite stuffing recipe, sweet potato recipes, corn bread and, of course, pumpkin pie. We all gather around and we recite a prayer to give thanks to all we have. Turkey tastes more like chicken compared to other meats. It has a blander flavor. A turkey leg tastes similar to a chickens’. The celebration itself is something to look forward to every year and it is something I hope to carry on with my own family one day.
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I marked all my changes with *stars* and (these) there are special cases from where you could choose what word to use I've separated them with a /slash. (lol yahoo says you have a lot of punctuation i think its fine though). Also mom should not be capitalized and Thanksgiving should be in case I've missed any.The most momentous and meaningful ritual in my life is Thanksgiving with my family. The whole day is considered an enjoyment time with my *family* and there is no arguing that in my eyes. Nothing is more perfect than my whole family joining together for Thanksgiving. As you know that it is eventful day celebration, showing gratitude to God and mostly just each others company. When I walk into the house I'm immediately assaulted by the earthy smells of garlic and oregano. My mouth waters as the scent of melting dried turkey and apple pie *(come from)* across the room. The heat in the kitchen is ferocious, my mother is curved over the sink scouring and scraping large stainless steel cookware which is only used for company. I know before opening the fridge door that there will be at least four long loaves of freshly baked full-size turkey resting there, awaiting their turn in the oven. As I *start to* set up the family table in the living room, the smell of Turkey fills the air as it cooks in the oven *(are/were)* wonderful. I love to sneak in to grab a taste of the gravy simmering on the stove. The delectable aroma of my mom's famous mussels rises from the pot, which can only mean dinner is right around the corner. Subsequently, I place a yellow tablecloth on the table; the napkins on the napkin holder. The table is set for 10, *we are* having 4 guests. If she made both *of* the pans , I can have at least 1 piece turkey *leg* for dinner, 2 piece *of* apple *pie* tomorrow for lunch, and if I hide a piece in the closet, another piece for lunch on Friday. Yes! Life is good.My grandmother comes over to help my mother in the kitchen preparing turkey. When the turkey *is* ready, my mother takes it out and places it right there in the center of the table. *That includes* green beans, mashed potatoes, a great gravy recipe, cranberries, *our* favorite stuffing recipe, sweet potato recipes, corn bread and, of course, pumpkin pie. We all gather around and we recite a prayer to give thanks to all *that* we have. Turkey tastes more like chicken compared to other meats. It has a blander flavor. A turkey leg tastes similar to a chickens. The celebration itself is something to look forward to every year and it is something I hope to carry on with my own family one day.
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Question : Could you check my grammar mistakes and sentence structure please?
The most momentous and meaningful celebration in my life is spending Thanksgiving with my family. The whole day is a peaceful time with my family and there is no arguing. Nothing is more perfect. We show gratitude for God's grace and each other’s company during this eventful celebration.My mouth watered as the scent of melting gravy and apple pie crossed the room. The heat in the kitchen was ferocious. My mother was hunched over the sink, scouring and scraping large stainless steel cookware which is only used for company. The delectable aroma of my Mom's famous mussels rose from the pot, which could only mean dinner was right around the corner. Subsequently, I placed a yellow tablecloth on the table and the napkins in the napkin holder. The table was set for 10 because we were having 4 guests. As I began setting the table in the living room, the smell of turkey filled the air as it cooked in the oven. It looks wonderful when put it in the middle of the table. Next I got out the fall colored plates. The napkins also had tiny fall leaves on them so they went along with the centerpiece that my mother bought. I got out the candles, the forks, and the glasses and put them on the table. After I lit the candles, I took a step back and the table looked as if it belonged in a magazine. It was exhilarating.The aroma of the turkey grew stronger and I started to panic. I knew that it wouldn't be too much longer until my family arrived. I could feel the excitement and the anxiety swell up inside of me. I began to relax because everything was going as planned. Since the turkey and all sides were on their way, it was then time to dress the table. Earlier that week, mother had purchased a beautiful centerpiece with the most vibrant fall colors: brown twigs, purple berries and all different colored leaves. After the turkey was done it was time to get the rest of the meal ready. We cut up onions and celery. My eyes began to water because the onions were so strong. The giblets were boiling on a pot that I started and the dressing was ready to be mixed together, and I put in the oven. My grandmother came over to help my mother prepare the turkey in the kitchen. When the turkey was ready, my mother took it out and placed it right in the center of the table along with the other dishes. The guest arrived. We all gathered around the table with the turkey and sides spread out before us in a magnificent feast, and we each began to say something we were grateful for. When it was my turn I looked around at my family, and the meal and just simply stated that I was grateful for the opportunity to fix this meal for them, for the food that the good Lord had given us, and I was thankful that my first Thanksgiving dinner was success.We ate green beans, mashed potatoes, a great gravy recipe, cranberries, my favorite stuffing recipe, sweet potato recipes, corn bread and, of course, pumpkin pie. I had never eaten turkey before. I was surprised that it tastes more like chicken compared to other meats, but it has a blander flavor.The celebration itself is something to look forward to every year and it is something I hope to carry on with my
Answer:
Spending cannot be the most ... celebration because it is not a one-off ...sorry I misunderstood but adding the word 'holiday' would clarify. Next paragraph moves from present into past tense. Napkins placed in napkin holderS. Otherwise your spelling and grammar both fine. It is customary, in prose, to write in full numbers from one to ten. With an extra place at the table your guest must be a very special person ... your future husband perhaps? Good luck. God bless. Gladgran.
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